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What will you do?Oh hello. What brings you into these woods?You want some alone time too huh?I understand your pain.Why, I have been in these woods for a while now.Everyone that goes through here just walks past me.No hellos.No Good Days.Pardon? People have been picking on you?Geez. That's harsh. What about?Hmm... Kids are just cruel. Don't worry about what they say.I think you are a very kind person to say hello to me.Nobody has for a long time now.How long you ask?About 7 years.Yes, that is a long time, isn't it?What!?It's happening to you too!?We can't have this!Pardon?....No...Don't...You need to live mate!Wh-What about your family?Your friends?You have no friends...Hmm...What about your dreams?Got any?...Everybody has something or someone to live for.You can't say that you have no dreams.No goals.Come on!Say it!....You can't, can you?Stop hiding from the truth.Stop living a lie.So what if you have no friends.So what if the things those kids said is real.So
.time will only heal yourwounds on the conditionyou'll let him prise themopen again, upon return